Ohhhhh god I love this already! Your writing style is one of my favorites, since you add in extra thoughts and feelings from the character/person. Makes the reader feel more connected to them and understanding.
Update soon! Pretty, pretty PLEASE! I'll bake you brownies. If you don't like brownies, then cookies. He'll, I'll open up a bakery just for you!
Note this was not a bribe, merely a boost of encouragement ^_^