PS. I told Soph that I auditioned her for this, and she says to let you know she's pyromaniac. Anyway, glad that I'm insane! You need make the chapters about twice the length, aim for perhaps 1000 words a chapter for a good read. Otherwise, I have no criticisms.
BleedingValentine xx
Author's response
I had to look up what that meant, and I quite clearly love it! I kind of had the same thing, and Gerard did too! Yeah, I know it was short. Fear not though, that was sort of a prologue type of thing. The rest of the chapters should be longer and more interesting! XD xx