Review for As i lay dying

As i lay dying

(#) Bella_Jinxx 2012-07-01

"And the guy who looks like he's is KISS is Andy"
Oh my god XD
This is really really good!!
It just needs a bit of grammar/spelling, and if you need a beta reader, email me at
claires.chemical.romance@gmail.com
-Jinxxy xxx

Author's response

ok i've sent you the story