Review for I Would Murder for a Kill!

I Would Murder for a Kill!

(#) BleedingValentine 2012-07-03

laughs maniacally Ohhwaaahaahaahaahaa!!!! But seriously though.... dump a body like that and leave the drivers licence in her pocket? Sloppy, very, VERY sloppy indeed. You shave the head so she's not immediately recognised, you remove ALL evidence of identification and SERIOUSLY? leaving a body in the pond?! Tsk tsk, very sloppy work indeed.

Is it scary that I know how to properly dispose of a dead body? I'm not criticising you, it's my character's lack of organisation :P Good chapter!

BleedingValentine xx

Author's response

Haha! Of course it was sloppy work! No one would just look in a pond. Maybe the body was there on purpose though? :O xx