Wow! I really really like this so far! Already, you've got me hooked - I want to know more about your Jon, more about Christian, just... Argh! Okay, now I know how you felt when you only had the first part of Phantoms to go with. :) This is one story I will not let you discontinue.
UPDATE WOMAN! XD
(please)
Author's response
Really? That's awesome! I wasn't sure you'd like it, so I'm really glad that you do. Thank you!
They are both horrifyingly screwed up lol. It's one of those it's going to be worse before it gets better kind of deals, but I do hope you read more. I'm about to update it because honestly the feedback surprised me, in a very pleasant way.
Yes! It drove me crazy! Not knowing what was going on. Oh my. Still not really knowing what's going on. It's so insanely hard to just wonder, but that's what makes it so good!
Haha, well with this review I sat down and wrote up the next chapter. Guess I can't stop now. ;)