SHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHIT (ya see what I did there?), I really like this. Just try to make the chapters a bit longer. Like put both Gerard's and Frank's P.O.V. in a chapter? :) Other then that I really love this, the idea of it, the way you write. :D Keep the chapters coming!
Author's response
This is my first ever fic so yeah, it won't be that good. I can't write long though. When ideas come to me they are small but frequent. Thanks so much. :)