okay let me begin with a "wow".
i could almost feel patricks anger, the betrayal he must have felt. they way you wrote his emotions was exquisite, and it makes me envious.
how do you provoke such emotion? Keep up with the updates, this story has blossomed into a quick “favorite”
Author's response
Er....I'm a bit speechless, this was one of the best reviews ever. Thank you thank you thank you!