Review for Sick.

Sick.

(#) DisenchatedDestroya 2012-07-11

I'm not entirely sure how you do it, but it seems that everything you write is something that I find extremely relatable. But not only is your poetry relatable (a great and impressive feat in itself) but it is also grabbing, well-written and original. I got a real sense of emotion from this, of desperation almost, and that just shows how much power you have over the words.

I think my favorite line was probably,
"A wrung-out soul undermined,"
because it was a very vivid metaphor and a really clever one at that.

Fantastic job! :D