Review for On My Own

On My Own

(#) Datdatdat 2012-07-11

Wow. I read through the previous chapters and thought this was really good (though something I wouldn't normally read). Punctuations and capitalization was there. You had very few grammar slip ups. I felt like you knew what your writing style was and had a grip on where this was going. But honestly? That bit about TiffanyRose was childish and uncalled for. Very unnecessary.