I've just finished reading the whole story, and while i don't prefer evangelion-type endings, it was a very good read. In times the fic seemed to haul itself in many directions, but i think it has structure and plot. No much descriptions in the later sex scenes but enough to satisfy. The only thing is that there were so many characters that some were lacking substance. But it is the curse of big harem type fics. I enojed it thoroughly and hope to read more of your work.
Unoviento.