I love this so much, you have serious talent and it seriously showed in this piece. It flowed so nicely, almost caught somewhere between poetry and science... I'm not sure if that even makes sense but I enjoyed it all the same. Happy birthday, Toro
My mom also thinks Ray is beautiful she says he looks like a lion
Author's response
Thank you! And it did make sense- I really liked it, actually. Thanks so much for reviewing, I'm glad you liked it!
Lucy X_O
P.S. My Mum says Ray's beautiful too O_O Freaky stuff!