Review for What about now?

What about now?

(#) StormVandal 2012-07-16

omfg stories like this are seriously my vice, dude. I needed a fix of high school frerard.

There were a few issues in the chapter with switching between first and third person, but overall I liked it a lot :)

Author's response

Thanks for pointing out the accidental switching between viewpoints, I fixed that problem! Please let me know if you see any more errors. (I wrote this in the middle of the night so there may be other stuff that I missed) Thanks again! :D