Review for What about now?

What about now?

(#) BleedingValentine 2012-07-17

Cute! I can understand why Gee lied to Frank, I wouldn't want him discovering things like that xD Fuff is awesome!

Anyway, it would be awesome if you made the chapters slightly bulkier, if you get what I mean? I don't specifically mean longer, I mean just a teensy bit of detail here and there, tiny bit more developed, etc.

Then again, I'm a slut for intricate plots and twisted lines and agonizing detail (even if I'm not that good at writing it), you know, that sort of thing... but if this is one of your first fics, don't worry so much. It's just me :) Update soon?

BleedingValentine xx