That seriously sucks about your mum not liking that you go on here. When my mum was still around, she used to love it that I found friends and fun in writing; hell, she even told me things to put in some of my writing. I guess the point that I'm trying to make is this; let your mum know that writing means a lot to you and that by posting it up here you get feedback. That's the only advice I really have for you here, sorry.
I'm super glad that you're planning on finishing that story though; I love it!
Hope to hear from you again soon. :)
Author's response
Yes. It is annoying that she doesn't like it. I tried to explain to her what exactly it was and that there's nothing wrong with it. I'm afraid of telling her that I actually wrote stuff up here. She really wouldn't like that. But it's okay. I will continue to write stuff as much as possible. I'm really happy that you like the story and it should e up soon hopefully! :)