I liked it.
It was cute, and wasn't too slow. It was a little fast, but I like stories that are a little fast in some parts. Plus it's not unbelievable.
The only problem I had was when you said Gerard was a year above Mikey, but then you said Mikey was 7 when Gerard was 10. Or maybe I misread that somehow.
Anyway, I liked it and I'd love to read more! :) Please update, I wanna see what happens with Frank and Mikey.
Author's response
Thank you! :3 I know it was a little fast, but I was originally intending for it to be a oneshot. I had absolutely no idea how to end this, so I just decided to make it chaptered.. I'm glad you liked it!