Review for Chapter 1. The Beginning

Chapter 1. The Beginning

(#) ToLost2FollowMyHeart 2012-08-02

its a wonderful being. set the seen greatly and layed out the basic format of the story. i cant wait to read on and see how the story goes!!! ps Frerard or not "make it hot"!~ Nereid CX

Author's response

Haha okay I'll try my best!
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