This is really good! I don't know why you haven't gotten any reviews yet. Anyway, update soon, I'm dying to read more. ;)
Author's response
I know right? I'm like stalking my own page like a bird and when I saw yours I was like 'BRWAAAAA!!!! ~le divebomb~' But my gf is reading this too but she doesn't have an account on here that I am aware of....so she can't review lol