Review for Change of Path

Change of Path

(#) Poppana 2012-08-07

I'm very happy for them :) Their baby won't be a bastard, either XD Was that mean to say? I'm sorry. By the way, I would name my child Stormageddon, Dark Lord of All.
But hey, was there ever a funeral for the kid's mom? o.O Because until this chapter I had like totally forgotten that she even died. I don't know, it seems like it should be a bigger deal, because now it's just like a minor detail. I dunno, maybe you intended to go in that direction, what do I know, right? :D It's just, she seemed to accept her moms death a bit easily. And now that I think about it, I would've liked to see a funeral. But of course it's up to you what you put into the story and what you skip :D
And now they have two weddings coming up, don't they? I love weddings. Especially if there's cake!

Author's response

Oh crap! I completely forgot about that! Hopefully my crappy computers and Internet connection justifies this! I'll put it in somewhere though! XD xx

Oh crap! I completely forgot about that! Hopefully my crappy computers and Internet connection justifies this! I'll put it in somewhere though! XD xx