Nice! Short, sweet, logical, and portrays other magicals as non-idiots (quite unlike most of the British ones in canon).
Author's response
Thanks for the review! And yeah, there are two ways of looking at the magical world of canon -- they are all idiots, but the Brits are the least stupid (the way many like to think of things, even if they don't realize it), or it's possible that not every magical is as stupid as the ones running Britain and Hogwarts