OH MY FUCKING GOD I HATE YOU!!!! Okay, maybe not I love you too much to hate you... :D I haven't even read the real story yet, I was in tears at the end of the first bit! You're so evil (But clever...)
... Well played, very clever of you XD
By the way, you're right, that would make a good alternate ending. :P
Okay, I'm off to read the real chapter now xo
Author's response
i read that you hated me and i was like 'NO!!! I'M SORRY'. (i like that line 'i love you too much to hate you'...i might use that in the story...if your cool with that.)
I feel clever:)thank you for the review.
hope you enjoy the rest...