Oh wow. I already know you are an amazing writer ('Coz yeaaa, I'm your biggest fan!!) and I know this is going to be totally amazing. Just watch your spelling and the words you use. I have noticed that you sometimes will write of instead of on or somthing like that, especially when you really get going with a story so just do a double take and re-check :)
I know, I actually don't know how that happens, sometimes I look back over it and I'm like
I didn't write that there!
but thank you! your reviews always make me smile ^_^