I don't know if you knowingly or unknowingly touched upon The L Word. If you did, I love you even more. I don't give a shit, I, a completely straight girl, love that show and Shane McCutcheon is my hero. If you don't already know her, she's super badass awesome and I worship her. Oh and Iove all the references in your chapters. It's awesome. And you seem to be doing really well. I can't rate you cause I I do it will have to be negatively. Stupid ficwad and its five point rule. But it was a fun chapter and interesting development. You merge so many characters and stories without making it awkward or forced. I have to go out now. It would have been a longer review. Sorry. But great chapter.
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I love you. Your reviews actually full on make me feel like writing all this is worth it. THANKYOU