Review for Giving Personalized Stories A Shot

Giving Personalized Stories A Shot

(#) atomickilljoy 2012-08-14

Name: Jennifer Delores

Age: 21

-Looks-

Hair: black, up to her neck, has one hot pink highlight

Eyes: brown

Height/weight:5'4 121lbs

Clothing: band t shirts, that are men's sizes, a pair of skinny jeans, and converse

Piercings/tatts: 3 tattoos:
"Rage And Love" ( right wrist)
"Awake And Unafraid" (left wrist)
"Take a sad song and make better"(right arm)

Personality: Sarcastic, smart, clever, makes sexual jokes, caring, easy to talk to, random, spazzy, and doesn't get mad often.

Likes: Band shirts, rock music, performing, singing, drawing, writing, and joking around

Dislikes: Dresses, skirts, tank tops, uncomfortable clothing, snobs

Story line: Ok, this is what I put for quite a few of these but I want to see how each one differs XD

Jennifer is a Mexican American girl, with one over protective brother and one mom. They want her to be an accountant and not a rockstar, so she tells them she's at college, when she's really in New Jersey, and is the lead singer of a band, with her 4 best friends: James, Andrew, Collins, and Danny. They are famous in New Jersey, and one day when performing, she meets the drummer for My Chemical Romance(Bob. Pretend it's the Revenge era XD) when they walk in one day because they wanted to see what the fuss was about and love happens, sparks fly etc. So, she gets famous to the point where her family(just the over protective brother and mom) find out. They visit her in her apartment in New Jersey, her brother is protective of her, he hates Bob etc. Basically, a big blowout. So at the end, he still hates Bob but manages to stay calm for his sister. Her mom didn't come along with the brother but she calls, tells her she was at first disappointed but now proud and Jennifer promises to visit soon with Bob and she does. :)


Characters you want included: Bobert Bryar(BOBERT XD), the rest of the band makes a cameo, her band makes a cameo at the beginning, when they're getting ready, the mom, and her older brother (call him whatever you'd like :D)

I'm not sure of the band name... maybe the Rebellion's Fighters or something idk you can decide :)