Ohh you've branched out to Love Hina now, that is sweet. It could us the kind of love that your stories bring.
Anyway about this chapter, loved it, wasn't sure what you were going to do at first, but I knew it would be great, and it was. The way you ended with Motoko's sister set to show up to lay down some hurt, and more then likely other fun things, was a perfect spot to end it. So keep sharing the great work with us it really makes my day so much better.