Review for Giving Personalized Stories A Shot

Giving Personalized Stories A Shot

(#) gerardsvictim22 2012-08-17

Name: Emily Tielens

Age: 21

-Looks-

Hair: black, up to her neck, has one hot pink highlight

Eyes: 2 different colored eyes 1 blue 1 green

Height/weight:5'3 120lbs

Clothing: band t shirts, a pair of skinny jeans, and converse

Piercings/tatts: 1 nose piercing.

Personality: Sarcastic, smart, clever, caring, easy to talk to, random,quiet shy and doesn't get mad often.

Likes: Band shirts, rock music, performing, singing, drawing, writing

Dislikes: sushi, pop music and being itchy.


Story line: Goes to a MCR concet only to end up getting kidnapped by the band.

Characters you want included: Gerard, Ray Frank and Mikey.

Author's response

Haha thanks. I can honestly say though, I have no clue how I'm writing this. I mean....wow....is there anymore story line you have in mind? I really don't know how to write a kidnapping story as a one-shot....

I'll try though. Maybe you'll see this and get back to me haha.