Review for Giving Personalized Stories A Shot

Giving Personalized Stories A Shot

(#) Bella_Jinxx 2012-08-22

Dear Jesus, I'm a one-shot whore. I just love them, and you did the first one so so so SO well. D'ya reckon you could, yanno, do another?

Name: Rihanna Elise Smithe

Age: 16

-Looks-

Hair: Dark red and curly, down to her waist.

Eyes: Amber, with darker flecks here and there.

Height/weight: Small, about 5"2. Weighs roughly 49 kg.

Clothing: Wears dark red skinnies and black hoodies, with checkerboard Vans.

Piercings/tatts: Has a small nose ring and a gravestone tattooed on her wrist. The gravestone reads: "RIP Sam: Dead but not forgotten, your weary widow marches on."

Personality: Shy, quiet. Hates attention. Quite witty, but prefers to stay out of the limelight.

Likes, Dislikes: Likes: reading, music, and tea. Hates: when people give her shit about Sam, trumpets, clowns, dark alleyways.

Story line: Oh, Alex. This one's long.

When Rihanna was 11, her brother Sam was murdered in a dark alleyway. (Henceforth the tattoo and the fear of dark alleyways.) She's tried to keep her brother's death a secret and for 5 years she's done a pretty damn good job. However, one day, the school whores find out and tease her endlessly over it. Upset, Ri runs from school and to the graveyard, falling to her knees on Sam's grave. She just sits there and sobs hysterically, until a certain raven-haired dude finds her. Gerard realizes that he knows Ri from school. He has a bit of a massive crush on her. He takes her back to his house and he and Mikey try to comfort her. Gerard takes her to his room and yeah, he kisses her and things are starting to get heavy and then Mikey walks in and is just like "... DUDE WHAT THE FUCK".

Characters you want included: Gerard and Mikey.

Hope you like it and maybe even do it and yeah. I like that storyline lots and lots.

Author's response

Lol....Rihanna.....haha I really don't like her. I'll look past that though, my judgement shall never make me bias.

Oh darn I was never good with borderline porn. I can hardly take a dirty joke without blushing.

I also don't know if I can get to it. School's starting up soon and this week is pretty much my last to do my own thing and I have some projects and my other story to attend to.

Hmm...............HHHHHMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM!!!!!!

Yeah I don't know...sorry darling. I'll see if I can but...if it doesn't get posted please don't hurt me T_T

Thanks for sticking around this long though ;)