Okay. Well. I was mistaken from earlier, I guess this will have Frerard elements in it later. But that's okay. Also, you're doing a good job writing this, it's written well.
Author's response
;) Potentially. Don't kill me for the lack of originality?
Thank you. I appreciate the compliment and I can only hope you continue to think so. My writing does take nosedives every now and again.