Review for Deconstruction

Deconstruction

(#) armourdude 2006-03-09

This chapter seems a little forced. The site gags are ok but not all that funny yet. The tazer thing got old right away. I think an occasional threat to use it may have been funnier if placed in the right context. But you did leave a bit a mystery with the fire thing. Now to find out what is so special with this kid.
On a positive note, you have done well to leave behind the rigidity of what you think should be expected to be more in the way of what some people will act.