so glad you update quickly :-) keep it up! i liked how a lot happened in this chapter, and the cliffhangers are classic. i also like how the guys interact with each other, it really draws the reader into the story as they seem like real people. lookin' forward to the next update!
Author's response
i know, I hate it when people don't update often. I'm such a hipocrit. i haven't updated my other story in a month. Thanks for the review!