I love your writing. It's realistic fiction. I love how Frank wants to impress, but didn't change the way he acts towards Gerard. Like calling him and 'asshole' and just being Frank.
There was Frank and Gerard and cute Frerard moments without Frank really letting on he wants it to be Frank "and" Gerard. I like how you did that, I think that's the first time I've seen that (you probably don't even get what I'm saying, I'm so weird *le sigh). Smart.
But the end... Bad feelings? Things ending badly? NOOOOO! Must erase all dat negative energee.. Awh it just got srss up in dis peace son. -holds Frank at gunpoint- You bettah take that thought back and go make Frerard babies! Man, I aint play wit chu! -cough cough- Lost my cool for a second. I'm back. Sorry.
Anywho, great chapter.
Author's response
I totally get it! we're def on the same page. I wanted Frank to still be sarcastic Frank and nOOOOOO DONT SHOOT HIM -holds up hands in a surrender- fanfics are supposed to have drama!