Aww, that was awesome! Amazingly well written, and such a great start!! I can't wait to see what happens, they were all really into character, so awesome job! Update soon!!
Author's response
Thanks a lot. I'm so glad! I'm glad they were in character, i was trying to go for that while making them look and act a little older... except Jay and his love of books. Lol. And I'll see what I can do.