That was so emotional. Really tugged at me. First it was all normal and kind of oddly adorable (well, as normal as their situation can be). Then he killed Bob and I was all 'BOBBERT! Why?! -sniffles-' . Then basically all that went through my mind when Frank lost control for a minute and turned on Gerard was 'OH FUCK... Oh FUCKING FUCK! SHIT FUCKING FUCK LUCK!'. Very awesome chapter. So many ups and downs. I hope Frankie doesn't die. Gerard is risking a life in jail to help him, so he better appreciate it. Everything about this chapter. Perfect, as we say in America 'I'd say a fancy french word that means something and sounds cool, but I don't know one'.
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So many runalong sentences in one review. Just take that in.
Author's response
Ahh thank you soooooo much!! :D I'm glad that the story has an affect on you cause that's kinda how I wanted people to read it... if that makes sense? It was difficult making Bob a kind of bad cause he is just too cute! I guess the characters in my story have no common sense :L
Oh and by the way I basically love America so you have just moved up on my list of favourite people xD And again your reviews and comments have just made this whole writing experience awesome so thank you!