Review for Free
I'm not normally a Peterick kind of person, but this really, really appeals to me. You've got me feeling sorry for Patrick, like I want to see him make it with Pete; it takes a good writer to get the reader to care about the characters this much.
As for posting it in the MCR category, I completely understand. I've posted stuff here before that doesn't belong (i.e. poetry, Phan) and to be honest, if a story's good (as this one is) it shouldn't really matter where it's posted.
Anyways, I loved this! :D