Ficwad is being ridiculous. It took me three tries to even be able to review this, and to log on to the site... don't get me started. X.x
But to the VERY short oneshot- it was tragic! Oh my freaking goodness! SO TRAGIC! Good, but tragic. I really wish it had a little more to it though, like what had happened- just more would be good, but the point was straight forward and the oneshot was emotionally provoking.