Hi! I'm Hanna and Im gunna start reviewing all yo new stories. So I read this fic a while ago about Gerard loving a girl in high school and then they break up and they get back together later. At the time I though it was such a great story but after reading yours I realized yours is much much better. I just started readig yours like 2 weeks ago, I've been reading multiple chapter everyday staying up late, taking screenshots so I can read it at school, this is honestly just an amazing Story, I think I'm so impressed because this story is so different. I think everyone who writes a fic about Gerard having a high school relationship wants the girl and gee to get back together and be all romantic right away when they meet back up. I love that your taking a different route. It was unexpected and it turned out great. Now to the criticism part. As you can tell I love this story so there's not a lot I don't like. Me as well as probably all the readers are rooting for Gerard to win Edith, not that I don't like Harrry, I do but ya know. But I enjoy reading the chapters about Gerard much more than chapters about Harry. The chapters where Edith goes on a date with him or when they went to the cottage, it was semi interesting but I like it a lot more when they're about Gerard. I'm not saying don't talk about Harry, I know he's essential to the story, I'm just saying I loooooove the parts about gerard! Now like other comments, for a while (and I still do) I have a feeling Harry might be cheating on Edith. He said he'd be at the studio early that one time and he wasnt and he always has a bunch of meetings and shit so I'm like hmm are teu actually meetings? And one more comment you're spelling bass wrong! You're saying base like in baseball but the guitar is spelled bass, okay thank you love your story k bye