i'm interested to see where this is going. The first chapter isn’t overly suspenseful, and you refrained from giving too many details about the main character. It’s refreshing.
i'm a sucker for attention to detail and setting an ambiance for the story. your first chapter proved to do exactly that.
Author's response
It should get interesting. However, at first I´m afraid that it might drag a little. But I just don´t want to give away the "twist" too early. I´ll just concentrate on this mysterious character for a while. (Next chapter you´ll find out who they are. If you haven´t already guessed. Or cheated by asking your magical CRYSTAL ball... There ya go with the lame jokes.) Again, thank you very much for the praise. :) That was exactly what I was aiming for.