Where do I begin? First of all, I'm so glad you updated. It's been ages. I've had trouble trying to find decent stories. It's written so brilliantly. It just flows, your thoughts are so lucid. I love the way you write. I would go into technical detail but this story is just so much more than that. I feel butterflies in my stomach, goosebumps and my mood fluctuates along with the characters. It is so cleverly string together but the thing that hits me most is the emotions. The reader feels everything. In this particular chapter, you've used words so cleverly that I'm already dying for the next one. Each character has so much individuality and are perfect foils and contrasts to each other. They compliment each other so well. It's gripping, it's get realistic and so beautiful. I really don't know what else to say. I look up to you and am already eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Well done!
Author's response
You reviews are always so kind, thank you so very much for this! While I do thoroughly enjoy writing, it's my readers that keep me going!