this is my opinion...
i don't see how you could end the story so soon without it feeling forced or rushed. i think there is a lot more that could be said, or expanded on. but you are writing it, so really i have no idea what you have planned.
but i love this story and i'd hate to see it end, so i'm speaking on a completely objective level. what do i know? :)
Author's response
Thank you for reading this story and actually liking it. This originally started out as a one chapter, completely short story. If you just read the default chapter you can kind of see that. Thanks to readers like you, i did continue it.
I don't like to drag my stories out through many chapters. I feel it loses a lot of substance sometimes, and you get detached from your original thoughts and ideas. I have already felt like i lost a lot in this story.
I believe I have an acceptable, 'ending' at least to what i have written thus far. Although, if this story does get a lot of readers who appreciate it and demand more I am not opposed to writing a sequel.
It solely depends on the readers and their reactions to this story.
Thank you for reading and reviewing. It means a lot to know someone honestly respect and likes your story.