Review for Some auditions for my new story :)

Some auditions for my new story :)

(#) PartyPoisen 2012-10-30

Name: Haven Grayce (last name. If gf of ray Tate.)
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Nicke name: Ava & Lady bug
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Age: 5 (if gf of Ray: 22)
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Part: Ray or Gerard's daughter. If not Ray's girlfriend. (i love Ray. I wanna date him XO. )
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Looks:
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If Gerard's daughter: hazel eyes. Jet black hair that is straight but shoulder lengeth. Always held back in a pony tail cause she hates her hair to touch her neck. Has a crooked smile and is always laughing.
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Personality: sassy and loves clothes and wont wear pink. Hates it. Has a joiking side and very clingy to parents/uncles. Loves to dance and sing. If she can find something high and she can climb it. She IS going to jump off of it.
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Ray's daughter: light brown hair that is really curly and goes down to her chin. Usually in pig tails so they look like two little puff balls. Has a mole on right shoulder on her back. Dark brown eyes and plumb lips.
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Personality: shy and keeps to herself around strangers. Curious about music and loves to play with Bob's drums. A energentic kid who loves to play. Super smart and loves her dads fro. Super clingy to him and a thumb sucker.
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Ray's: dirty blonde hair and blue gray eyes. Pale skin and has a mole on the right side of her neck. Has a tat that says Cara Mia on her right rib.
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Personality: bubbly and smart. Loves the out doors and a great with kids. Can ber serious but also a real people pleaser.