FicWad

I... I feel kind of awkward reviewing after that conversation.

Sorry I haven't reviewed earlier, I just now received a notification that you've posted something. Seriously, what the fuck Ficwad.

But yeah, I love this story :) It's exciting. The thing with the duvet is kinda wacky, what's up with that I wonder? Usually it's the other way around; the duvet is a blanket of bulletproof steel that protects you from the monsters beneath your bed. Right?

You asked for suggestions. Perhaps they could organize a mass escape and they'll all run away, but then the bitchy chick, whatever her name was I forgot, finds out and informs the adults right as they're about to escape. And in panic, the kids scatter around town, and the adults try to gather them like sheep, and in the end they're all brought back into the house thing but someone got hurt in the escape so they're discouraged from trying to break out again XO Or something. Just a suggestion.

Update or I'll eat your family.