Review for A Man of Substance

A Man of Substance

(#) theflock7 2012-11-10

Wow!! That was so cute!! ^___^ I love the way you use similes, like you don't use them obviously (like you're trying to include them) but when you do put similes in it works sooo well! :) I don't think I can think of anything you can improve on, your writing is just so perfect!! I'm not just saying that, it really is!!!