for giving out serious literary criticism- you are welcome.
it seems that you kind of forced yourself into writing this chapter. it was pretty short. are we pressuring you? we, as readers, have a tendency to be very needy, so i apologize.
now update...
Gah. :)
Author's response
Well, not really forced but let´s say that my heart was really with the parallel chapter this time. ;) You update first!... No, you.... No, you do it first!