Review for Heaven Help Us

Heaven Help Us

(#) gerardsvictim22 2012-11-11

Name:Emily Harris
Age: 14
Looks:
Hair-Long black with bright red and blue streaks.
Eyes- 1 blue and 1 brown.
Skin-White.
How you got kidnapped: Was walking home from work, and maybe saw something I should't have seen.
Any family members(do they care about you?): I live by myself, but when my younger brother Spencer comes by to see that I'm not home. He gets a feeling something's wrong.
Anything else?: Maybe they drug me from trying to escape a few times.

I'm a little nervous, because this is the only second time i've ever auditioned for any story. So hope it;s ok.

Author's response

It's fine :)