Review for Heaven Help Us

Heaven Help Us

(#) Mirazal 2012-11-11

THIS WAS NOT A BAD CHAPTER
WHAT ARE YOU EVEN SAYING

Eh, I'll give you a victim.

Name: Joshua Hardin
Age: 22
Looks:
Hair- light brown, cut right past the ears, fluffy dude bangs
Eyes: dark green
Skin: 'ayyy WHITE BOY
How you got kidnapped: went outside at night to investigate a suspicious noise
Any family members?: parents disowned him and his younger brother (Hunter, 18) and they live with their best friend and best friend's cousin; I guess, if he died, the parents would be concerned somewhat
Anything else: hmm. Maybe give him a girlfriend. Katelynne, 21? Idk, just thought if Joshy boy is gonna die he might as well have some love first

Author's response

Ok :D