Grammar: 4
Plot: 4
Characters: 2 here because I can’t see Josh, and that was a big thing in the story. I see the women quite well, but not Josh. Please don’t hate me....
Knowledge: 4! Great job. I know a lotta people had issues for this! ^_^
ps: I NEED TO JUST COME ONTO YOUR REVEIWS WITH POPCORN GUYS THIS IS AMAZING
Author's response
I don't hate you! :D
Thanks :)