I know it says "short" Joe story but please: GIVE ME MORE! I´ll give you a rating point that is supposed to stand for the whole story up to now.
I love how this is totally different to most stories: The girl/ woman doesn´t want to be with him because she worries that their relationship will be really difficult. Let´s face it: That´s certainly true... So, I´ll stop rambling now and you get to writing a next chapter. :)
Author's response
I guess i must be ficwad naive, because i don't really know what the rating points are for. Although, even if you were to give my story a rating point, to me i would just rather you leave me a comment like you continuously have. That means everything to me. Thank you.
I am writing the next chapter, which will most likely be the last chapter. If for some reason, this story obtains a few more readers who feel the way you do about it. Then i will make a sequel to this story.
You will also understand the female characters POV, in the next chapter. I am tyring to make it "perfect" the only problem is, I am a perfectionalist and I dont believe it ever is perfect.
Anywayy... Thank you for reading my story and reviewing!