It’s definitely more song-like, and I really liked it. Honestly, every line is fascinating; thought-provoking, however simple- how do you do it ha?! Saw a few words that whacked my sub-conscious and my messed up mind started playing songs from the The Used, but kept reading without a tune, (pressed mental mute button) and it’s beautiful. Could see it being played.. or just read. Love these pieces, keep writing!
Thank you very much! You know, most of the time, I actually think it sounds kinda silly, so I'm really glad you think it's thought-provoking! xD I'm really glad you liked it, and I really appreciate you taking the time to review- thank you! :D
P.S. The Used are so awesome. :'D