I like how the reader is thrown into the action and how the story unfolds as the reader keeps reading. The personality of the main character is what keeps it interesting. Good!
Author's response
OOH!!!! THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU!!!!! eheh... wow, my first reviews a good one! Youve made my day, really! sqeals It's always good to know that SOMEONE out there likes my writing... XD Thanks again!