Review for Ripe

Ripe

(#) acwale 2012-12-09

Poor April. She reached out to her dad, and he really was a let down. Glad that Kirk wasn't upset that she hadn't told them about him.

The conversation about cheating was a bit of a surprise. Strange that he didn't say that it wouldn't happen. Hope that it wasn't foreshadowing...I really like them as a couple.

Curious about the comment about James...Wonder what it means???

Still really like your story. Looking forward to the next update.

Author's response

Hi, thank you for your comment.
About Kirk: he didn't say he wouldn't cheat because he wanted to be honest and knew very well it could happen, even just in one drunken night.