First of all, I love the chapter title. It´s sweet and it sticks. Kinda like my favorite bubble gum. Har har.
So yeah, I wouldn´t have pointed out that Bree´s sarcastic and cynical if she doesn´t really say anything sarcastic and cynical. But I get your point so just ignore my bitchiness. :)
Also, the name Bree makes me think of cheese for some reason... Onto the next chappie.
Author's response
i actually wasnt thinking of cheese wen i came up wit da name but now u mention it... btw how do u get pix nd dat up on ur profile?